Storyboard revisions....

[gem2niki]

(copy-pasted from a post i made to my class yahoo group)

I haven't put it in animatic format until I can nail down the
story....below are the links.

The beginning is similar to my previous version
(http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=STzWqUjEfAg) except, I changed the
setting to a coffee shop and male character is reading a book on
"Guide to Confidence" or something like that. And the second half of
the scene is extended differently...

When the female character is stopped from leaving, the guy becomes too
nervous and speechless to talk to the girl. He frantically turns
around to review the book he was reading earlier. The girl notices
this, taps his shoulder, and reveals she was also reading the same
book. The guy smiles in relief. In the end, they are sitting at the
coffee table chattering away... Then a end cut to the two copies of
the book with title of the film perhaps...

Page1: http://home.comcast.net/~caprisushi/story_rev3_s.jpg

Page2: http://home.comcast.net/~caprisushi/story_rev4_s.jpg

Not sure if that's okay or what I should cut etc. I'm fixed on keeping
the beginning half of the scene. Hopefully it's under 30 sec...

I'm getting a headache thinking how long it will take to finish this....

Comments

[gem2niki.livejournal.com]

i'm trying to figure that out too....unless she walks in front of him or recognize a certain page....

[asaphira-sachi.livejournal.com]

...maybe it slips out of his hands due to his nervousness XD? And the girl sees it/picks it up?

[gem2niki.livejournal.com]

ack...i tried laying the scene out...but looks like it'll take more shots....

do you think chai will go over the storyboard again individually or something?

[asaphira-sachi.livejournal.com]

Hmm he said we're gonna be animating... I'm taking that as we're working by ourselves unless we have questions for him. Not sure =/ cuz he'll also be going over design sketches.