Print - Takeru WIP help

[gem2niki]

Roughly colored of the new version of http://gem2niki.deviantart.com/art/Sky-Takeru-17666651



It doesn't hurt to not add the other birds does it? and replace it with feathers? Maybe I need to add more feathers. I don't have enough freakin time to add birds T___T I don't really get why this pictures was so popular to begin with....was it because its Takeru...or the birds or what...

ARGH SO TIRED ;o; 3am. Finals tomorrow....I still have 20% to go for painting and this print and reborn print to go..... Must finish everything tomorrow today.....

*short bedtime*

EDIT: Thanks for the suggestions guys! Added a few things....now I need to clean up the feather, cloud, and birds.... Tomorrow is FANIME!!! HOLY MOLY. I need to finish this and reborn tomorrow morning before I head to work T___T

Comments

[errorism.livejournal.com]

I think it looks great without the other birds. It draws more attention to the one that's there.

[jen-kat.livejournal.com]

I think it might be both? XD; I liked it because it was Takeru and then the whole sky/flying theme.

Save me a print of this? *puppy eyes*

EDIT: Oh yeah, I agree about having only that one bird there. =)

[vejiicakes.livejournal.com]

More birds than one would probably be way too busy.

Also I can't believe you're finding the time to work on finals AND Fanime stuff :o

[fightfair.livejournal.com]

Ahhhh! I remember this picture. *A* It looks great redone! I think a few birds would add a nice touch (not as much as before, and maybe in the distance), but it also looks good with just feathers. ♥

[chiizupan.livejournal.com]

I liked this one a lot too~ I believe it's the dynamic pose and the lighting :3 I think it looks good with both, feathers or birds. If you're going with feathers, you could stick some smaller, less focused ones in the background...?

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